Written By Annette Holland on 2/9/16 | 8:47 PM
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I felt like this book couldn't decide if it was a Harlequin bodice-ripper or an introduction to a new detective series character. At first, Addison Holmes seemed hilariously relatable, but I quickly got tired of hearing about her hair, makeup, and outfits when they didn't really further the story. As a reader, I know Murphy's Law exists, but c'mon! The extreme ridiculousness of some of the things that happened to Addison wouldn't be funny in a sitcom with a laugh track.
Her interactions with Nick weren't really believable considering the circumstances under which they met and his entrances and exits were more like dream sequences or wishful thinking. There was, at least, one continuity error/conversation when Addison is with Kate and Nick appears that really made no sense, it was like the scene was cut from something larger and the information to tie the scenes together was sent down the Well of Lost Plots.
There was very little character development and nothing to entice me to pick up the next book in the series, not even the teaser chapter at the end. Where are the strong, competent female detectives? Maybe the series should be more about Kate.
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About author: Annette Holland
Jill-of-all-trades, mistress of a few. My main gift is translating tech into English. Android enthusiast. Browncoat extraordinaire.
I have been blogging for over a decade, mainly as a hobby and creative outlet, just a little space to share my thoughts. It's also my guinea pig when I try out new technologies, new code tricks, and new designs. Come for the content, stay for the content. I'll try not to bore you.